广东高考英语写作分析_2021广东高考英语写作

1.请问，谁知道06年、07年、08年、09年、10年广东省英语高考的作文？

2.如何在广东高考英语写作中拿高分

高考英语写作开头句型

　1)对立法：先引出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法，适用于有争议性的主题。

　[1] When asked about..., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ?. But I think/view a bit differently.

　当被问及道......的话题，大多数人认为，但是我却持有一点反对意见。

　[2] When it comes to ...., some people believe that?. Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true. There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements, but I tend to the former/latter.

　一提到....一些人相信....然后另一部分人却不这么认为。这两种观点都有相对正确的地方，但我更倾向于前者(后者)

　[3] Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that..... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....

　现在，普遍的观点认为...他们坚信....但我对此却表示怀疑...

　2)现象法：引出要剖析的现象或者问题，然后评论。

　[1] Recently the rise in the problem/phenomenon of ... has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.

　近来有个现象(问题)不断发生...并且已经受到公众广泛关注。

　[2] Recently the issue of the problem/phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus/into public attention.

　最近关于....的现象(问题)已经进入了公众的视线。

　[3] Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.

　通货膨胀(****、社会不平等社会问题)已经成为了新的可怕的真相，使我们不得不持续地面对。

　3)观点法：开门见山，直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法。

　[1] Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...

　现在越来越多的人已经开始意识到...

　[2] Now there is a(n) growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to....

　越来越多人已经意识到....的必要性

　[3] Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ....

　现在人们已经不断地密切关注......的重要性

　[4] Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that....

　是时候应该对用一种新的`观点(态度)来看待...了

　4)引用法：先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法，来引出文章要展开论述的观点!

　[1] "Knowledge is power." This is the remark made by Bacon. This remark has been shared by more and more people.

　?知识就是力量?这是培根的名言，正被越来越多的人分享。

　[2] "Education is not complete with graduation." This is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion.

　?教育不应该随着毕业而结束。?这是一个著名的美国哲学家的观点，现在越来越多人分享着他的名言。

　[3] "...." We often hear statements/words like those/this.

　我们经常听到这句名言...

　[4] We often hear such traditional complains as this "....".

　我们经常听到这句古训...

高考英语必考短语

　get on well with sb; like to be with students;

　be gentle with us; be kind to sb;

　be a strict teacher; be strict with one?s pupils;

　be strict in work

　We think of him (her) as ?; help sb with sth;

　praise sb for sth ?; blame sb for sth..

　give advice on ?; question sb on ?

　be satisfied with ?

　correct the students? homework carefully and prepare for the next day; give sb a lot of work;

　try to teach sb good study habits; make one?s lessons lively and interesting; teach sb. sth.;

　teach sb to do sth.

　devote all one?s time to work;

　admire (sb.for) his devotion to the cause of education

　佩服他对于教育事业的献身精神。

高考英语虚拟语气考点

　考点一、虚拟语气的基本用法

　1.与现在事实相反的虚拟语气，基本结构为：主语+动词的一般过去时(be动词用were)+其他成分+if+should/would/could...+动词原形+其他成分。例如：

　①If it were not for the fact that she ______ sing，I would invite her to the party.

　A.couldn't B.shouldn't C.can't D.might not

　解析 句意为：如果不是因为她不会唱歌的事实，我会邀请她来参加那次聚会的。that从句为同位语从句，描述的是事实，用陈述语气。正确答案为C。

　2.与过去事实相反的虚拟语气，基本结构为：主语+动词的过去完成时+其他成分+if+should/would/could...+have done+其他成分。例如：

　If the weather had been better，we could have had a picnic.But it ______ all day.

　A.rained B.rains C.has rained D.is raining

　解析 句意为：如果天气好的话，我们是能够去野餐的，但是下了一天的雨。句子前半部分陈述的是与过去事实相反的事情，所以用了虚拟语气。"下了一天的雨"是事实，所以用陈述语气。因为是发生在过去的事实，所以正确答案为A。

请问，谁知道06年、07年、08年、09年、10年广东省英语高考的作文？

　备战高考，对于英语的写作技巧不掌握一点怎么行呢?下面是我给大家整理的高考英语基础写作技巧，供大家参阅!

高考英语基础写作技巧

　一、基础写作题的特点

　高考设置基础写作题目的目的是要检测考生最基础的书面语言表达能力，如用词的合理性、句子结构的复杂度、语法运用的正确性、信息内容的完整性、句子之间的连贯性等。

　1. 写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活。

　历年来高考作文题的题材都非常贴近考生的学习和生活，如校园活动、校外见闻、交友、旅游，和考生有关的话题讨论等。

　让我们先回顾五年以来基础写作的话题。

　2. 写作的体裁主要是故事性描述和应用文。

　基础写作题的体裁主要有故事性描写和应用文写作两大类。命题形式可能是看图写故事、看图表说明、根据表格信息完成一封短信或一份通知这类的应用文等。

　3. 内容呈现的方式具有半封闭性。

　基础写作题是半封闭的，其特点是写作的内容是被规定了的，考生必须将文章所规定的信息点完整、全面地表达出来，但对于语言表达的方式、信息组织的先后秩序、需要补充哪些必要的信息等，考生又有一定的自主构思空间。

　4. 用5句话表达。

　基础写作只能用5句话来表达题目所给的全部信息点，用5个简单句很难完成任务，必须使用复合句或并列句来综合多个信息点，而且还要照顾句子之间的衔接和语意上的连贯。

　二、写作技巧及顺序

　由基础写作题的特点可以看出，它对考生提出了一些新的要求。

　1. 通篇浏览，把握整体。

　浏览文章信息，并对其处理，将其分割成五句话，做到哪句话包含哪些信息。主要考察应试者的信息组织能力。

　信息组织能力包括信息归类、信息排列和信息表达三个环节。

　首先，对于题目所提供的各种信息点需要依照一定的标准将信息进行归类，并初步计划将哪些信息放到同个句子中;

　其次是将信息进行合理的排列，排列必须依照一定的标准，如时间顺序、空间顺序、因果关系、递进关系等;

　第三是选择信息表达的秩序，确定句子之间的先后关系，这既要考虑语法上能否衔接，还要考虑语意上的连贯。在组织信息的过程中，还要对某些信息进行必要的增删，使文章意思连贯、语言畅通、逻辑严密。

　2. 集中兵力，各个击破。

　在第一部的基础上，把五个句子逐一写清楚，包含所需信息。在组织句子时注意一下几点：

　a) 一个句子首先要找清楚主谓宾，然后想办法拓展这句话，把其他的信息加进去。运用复杂句子的能力。

　b) 一个句子有且仅有一个谓语(并且谓语)。

　改错：

　I writing the letter to complain about I bought the shoed recently.

　主要考察应试者运用复杂句式的能力。

　第一类是复合句，包括含有名词性从句的复合句，含有定语从句的复合句，含有状语从句的复合句。

　例：

　More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, which ranks the first in the world.

　第二类是并列句：

　具有递进关系的并列句， 如由and，then，besides，in addition, furthermore，moreover, what?s more等连接的并列句;

　具有转折关系的并列句，如由but，however，on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句;

　具有平行选择关系的并列句，如由both?and?，as well as，as well，neither?nor?or，either?or?，not only?but also?等连接的并列句。

　例：

　More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted and it ranks the first in the world.

　第三类是一些特殊句型，如使用非谓语动词、强调句、倒装句、含有with复合结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主语it开头的句子等。

　例：

　More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.

　c) 想办法为作文加分。

　1. 多多使用各种连词，使文章更为连贯。

　顺接/递进：Firstly/ secondly/thirdly, besides, in addition, what?s more, what?s worse, what?s more important, moreover, also, finally, last but not least,.

　转折：but, however, nevertheless(然而), yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, while

　原因：because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to

　结果：so, therefore, as a result, so that, then, so ?that, such ?that

　总结：to sum up, to conclude, in conclusion, in summary, finally, in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking,

　2. 多使用高级词汇，句式和短语进行变换，不要重复使用一个句式和短语。同时要注意避免常见错误：

　1)不要为了减少句数而不断使用逗号，一定要通过从句，连词，非谓语等来减少句数。 如：It was raining hard, they could not work in the fields. 改为：

　It was raining hard, so they could not work in the fields.

　They could not work in the fields, because it was raining hard.

　2)时态错误：一定要根据文章的语境判断该使用的时态

高考英语基础写作技巧实战

　实战演练一

　用不同的句型写出下面的句子。

　经历 心情

　被接纳为亚运会志愿者 兴奋

　01 同位语从句： The news that I was accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games made me very excited.

　02 宾语/主语从句： It made me very excited / I felt very excited that i had been accepted as the volunteers for the Asian games.

　03 状语从句： When i heard that i had been accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games, i felt very excited.

　04 定语从句： I was accepted as the volunteers for the Asain Games, which made me very excited.

　05 非谓语动词： Hearing that i had been accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games, i felt very excited.

　06 普通连词：I was accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games and i felt so excited about it.

　07 倒装句/强调句：It was last week that i was accepeted as the volunteers for the Asian Games and I felt so excited about it.

　实战训练二

　第一节 基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)

　假设你是你校校园广播站的记者，请根据以下内容给广播站写一篇英语新闻报道。

　[写作内容]

　参考词汇：改革开放 reform and opening up

　[写作要求]

　1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部所给要点;

　2. 报道中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

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　To celebrate the great achievements in the past 30 years of reform and opening up，a speech contest organized by Senior Two was held in the gymnasium of our school on the afternoon of March 15th, 2010. More than 1200 people were lucky to listen to the speeches on the spot, including all the teachers and students in Senior 2, the leaders of our school and parents of some students. Eighteen contestants / candidates from different classes in Senior Two delivered wonderful speeches very fluently. Some of them talked about the great changes which had taken place in our country through their personal experiences and others sang high praise for the wise policy of reform and opening up by comparing the present of their hometowns with the past. This activity made us more confident and proud of our country and we all made up our mind to study harder to build our country more beautiful.

　实战训练三

　基础写作

　假设你是李华，昨天下午参加了英语才艺大赛(Talent Show)，并获得一等奖。以下是参加情况及获奖感受：

　1. 看别人比赛时：紧张;

　2. 自己表演时：想起Mike数月的努力与帮助，冷静;

　3. 在最有挑战的问答环节：谨记Mike的建议，顺利;

　4. 宣布结果时：兴奋，遗憾Mike不在场。

　[写作内容]

　请根据以上介绍，给回美国度假的外籍教师Mike写一封感谢信，内容包括：

　1. 告知获奖;

　2. 介绍参赛情况;

　3. 表达获奖感受。

　[写作要求]

　只能用5个句子表达所给的全部内容。信的开头与结尾已给出。

　[评分标准]

　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　Dear Mike

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　Please accept my warmest thanks. I look forward to your return to China.

　Yours,

　Li Hua

　Dear Mike,

　I?m writing to let you know that I won first prize in the English Talent Show yesterday afternoon. Before it was my turn I watched the others and got very nervous. But when I was on the stage, I thought of all your efforts to help me during the past few months and gradually calmed down. Although the question-and-answer section was the most challenging, I got through it quite smoothly by remembering all your suggestions. When the judge announced the result I was very excited but it was really a pity you were not there.

　Please accept my warmest thanks. I look forward to your return to China.

　Yours,

　Li Hua

　2013年广东省高考英语作文

　Ⅳ 写作(共两节，满分40分)

　第一节 基础写作(共1题;满分15分)

　你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。

　[写作内容]

　请根据以下信息，写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。

　志愿者的选拔

　到2015年，在全球选出约30名去火星的志愿者

　志愿者的条件

　至少18岁

　做好不回地球的准备

　愿与他人保持良好的关系

　专家观点

　火星条件太艰苦

　面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧

　志愿者观点

　厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活

　如果成功，就是人类英雄

　火星：the Mars

　[写作要求]

　只能用5句话表达全部内容

　[评分标准]

　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯

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　2012年广东高考英语作文

　Ⅳ 写作(共两节，满分40分)

　第一节 基础写作 (共1小题;满分15分)

　你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。

　写作内容

　请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物

　姓 名：Allan Stewart

　国 籍：澳大利亚

　出生日期：1915年3月7日

　世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大

　学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。

　第一个学位：1936年获得

　第二个学位：医学博士

　第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。

　第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。

　*硕士学位：master?s degree; **博士：doctor

　[写作要求]

　只能用5个句子表达全部内容

　[评分标准]

　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

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高考英语写作指导

　1、高考写作的实质?变相的考察句型与词汇的灵活应用

　英语写作不同于语文作文的写作，如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈，那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。我之所以这样来形容，是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、这三种形式给定大家了，内容方面，不需要学生进行发挥，大家所需要发挥的就是给这个不变的内容不要老去穿毫无变化的校服(简单句)，而要去穿一些不一样的衣服，让它显得不那么单调，让判卷老师能看到不同，而那些所谓的衣服也就是多变句型与词汇。

　2、写作的评分标准?怎么去迎合评卷老师的胃口

　我了解到目前很大一部分学生的作文都处在15分左右，写作满分25分，15分也就是个及格分，而很多学生都是为了提分才来到了新东方，那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?这个问题很容易回答。15分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但是全都是很简单句子的一个堆砌，没有任何的亮点。而20多分的作文句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的句子穿的衣服已经不是校服，而是李宁、耐克，或者是阿迪，所以让人觉得很?拽?，而高考英语写作要的就是这种很?拽?的感觉。

　3、写作提分的三要素?句型，连词，高级词汇

　句子是我们写作文最大的单位，有了漂亮的句子，用好的连词将其连句成段，在加上一些如星星般亮点词汇的点缀，一篇好的高考英语作文就有了。而这三个因素中最容易把握的是句子，最难的是高级词汇，限于大家的词汇还比较有限，一篇文章中出现那么一两个就够了。我们应该把重心放在句型上，因为这个最容易把握。

　但是大家又有这样的困惑，学校里老师也给了我们很多的句型啊，动辄成五十上一百句的，大家背的挺多，但是面对考试的时候，发现背的那些怎么也用不上。其实不是那些东西没有用，而是它们太干了，就好比一根干骨头，大家嚼起来很没有味，也不知道该把他们往哪里放。

　在这里我给大家提供一种比较切实可行迅速提高的练习方法，在接下来的时间里只要大家按照这个方法来，就一定会有收获。找历年真题，一周只需要写两篇，但是要这么来写：

　1. 把你要写的内容要点用九到十句的汉语表达出来。

　2. 逐一地进行翻译，不是用简单句，而是要刻意地去想。

　(1)可以用什么样的复杂句。

　(2)怎样去避开不会的表达，转义。例如：

　这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。

　1)This book was so interesting that I read it again and again.

　2)This was such an interesting book that I read it again and again.

　3)This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again.

　4)So interesting was this book that I read it again and again.

　这四句译文当中无疑评卷老师最欣赏的是第四句，因为它用了倒装。

　再例如：

　如果征收门票，需要建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象。 这句话中肯定?收?那个动作很多同学不会表达，那能不能想一个转义的方式，既避开了?收?这个动作还能表达原句的含义。

　A wall and a gate have to be built if there is an entrance fee, which doesn't help the image of the city.

　这个译文中用一个大家很熟悉的经典句型there be句型化险为夷。

　4、如何备考

　其实这种思维大家都有，但是没有成为一种思路，让它能在考试中起到作用，那是因为大家练得少。英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地，一方面大家要分数，但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇。毫不夸张地说，有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文，所以练习是很重要的，要是现在不练而把高考当练习，那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了，到那时你不要骂评卷老师不公平，而是应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不多练几篇，时间都是挤出来的，希望大家可以挤出时间来练写作。

　

如何在广东高考英语写作中拿高分

以下是2006-2010广东高考英语写作试题及范文，希望能帮到你!

2010年广东高考英语作文真题

Ⅳ 写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。

内 容：公共场所禁烟

实施时间：2011年1月1日起

实施范围：全国

目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟

措 施：张贴禁烟标志

相关数据：

（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿

（2）分 布：男性75％;女性：25％

（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿

（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年

二手烟：second-hand smoke

[写作内容]

请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括：

1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围;

2.目标和措施;

3.相关数据。

[写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

第二节 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

In junior high school, one of my classmates, Eithan, was addicted to TV. This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who’s the Boss?

Then one day Ethan’s mother made him an after in order to draw him back to his school subiects. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quit TV. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.

In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with cash for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will.Psychologists warn that money can actually make lies perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical hattle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should be despite decades of reforms and budget increases.

[写作内容]

1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：

(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：

(2)你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；

(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习

[写作要求]

1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

2009年广东英语高考范文：

1.基础写作(就我国中小学生近视问题一篇采访报道)

Last weekend ,I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle student's short-sightedness.It is said that slightly more than 50% students,which ranks the No.1 in the world, are short-sighted.Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and three is still no cure for short-sightedness.He suggestedthat we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises.What's more,since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness,we need to pay attention to using the pen.

2.读写任务（概括短文并就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”发表议论：约150词)

In order to be hugged or photographed by tourists, koalas do not have enough sleeping, which makes them angry. And now the forbids the touriststo take photo with the koalas

Should tourists take photos with animals?

Koalas in wildlife parks can’t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The is thinking to make the tourists’ behaviour illegal to protect the animals.

When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.

I don’t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can’t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife park can set some special time, during this time, tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.

2008年广东英语高考范文：

1.基础写作（编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍）

Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.

2.读写任务（写题目是”Preparing Myself for College Life”的发言稿：150词左右）

Mike said it was tough to accomplish the general adjustment but he began to enjoy himself after that due to various activities. He advised freshmen to be active in order to make new friends.

As far as I am concerned, I’m preparing to enter a university and leaving the high school where I’ve been studying for three years. I really had a great time in this school where I grew from a na?ve kid to a grown-up. I think I will absolutely miss my life here and miss every single person that I met here. But in the meantime, I am looking forward to my new life in the college. I sometimes daydream that maybe I’ll bump into a handsome boy, have fire friendly roommates and be taught by a group of fabulous teachers. It would be wonderful if this ideal daydream come into reality!

2007年广东英语高考范文：

1.基础写作（调查“谁是你的偶像”）

Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions have greatly changed our life.

2.读写任务（以Ari的身份给父亲写信，祝贺他的50岁生日：150词左右）

Dear Daddy,

Tonight is your 50th birthday, and I haven’t really got the chance to say all of my thanks I want to tell you. I read your letter you wrote to me when I was born 18 years ago. You gave me the name “Ari” and hoped I would be brave and responsible to the sociality. I was so moved by your deepest love to me. And I love you too Daddy.

When I was a primary school student, you always encouraged me to do well in school and each evening. I was asked to present at least one new thing I had learned that day. You told me that I could be whatever I wanted to be, as long as I got good grades and continued my education.

Thanks for supporting me over the last 18 years of my life. I wish you a healthy body and a happy life. Love,

Ari

2006年广东英语高考范文：书面表达——描述今昔通讯方式的变化, 以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响（100词左右）

People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. But nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead. This change in communication has good effects on our life and work. Compared with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient. If you miss your grandmother, you just take out your phonhe and say "hello" to her. If you want to place an order with a foreign company, you can e-mail the message, It’ll be a matter of minutes before you get their reply. Aren’t we living in a smaller world?

1字要好看（绝对有用） 2 尽量要避免低级语法错误的出现(尤其不能出现在前几段，后果很严重的) 3如果你精通语法的话，那就让句式要高端大气上档次（神马虚拟语气，倒装句，定语从句，属于从句，同位语从句，能用就用，但用不上就不要勉强，模棱两可的就不要用） 3过渡句该有的是后必须有 4内容要充实，字数要够（写到倒数第二格吧，别空太多） 5问问老师（不是监考老师），寻求指导（老师肯定比我有经验） 这样拿个20来分的写作应该行吧！不过其实这也受高考英语试题难度的影响的 如果前面的客观题大家都的了高分 那么后面的作文评卷人就会刁难考生的（这是潜规则了） 以上内容都是本人根据自己的高考及其备考经历手写的 希望对你有用 好好加油哦 祝你高考金榜题名 另外也希望你给个过吧 没分的日子太难熬 有好多问题想问 谢谢啦